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SmartChick
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On A Journey To The Unknown

0 posted 2003-05-12 11:15 PM



Away To Stay
~ By Sue ~

There are good days
And there are bad
Then there are those
When I feel sad

One step forward
And two steps back
This world of mine
Just seems so black

Oh happy days
Please come my way
Take my troubles
Away to stay

5-12-03



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1 posted 2003-05-12 11:42 PM


Know the feeling! They do go, but you know you'll never look back at 'em through the "good old days" lens.....not if you live real.

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Justbleu
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2 posted 2003-05-13 01:03 AM


The flow of this is lovely.....
A good strong write!!!!
I hope a little sunshine comes again your way!!!!
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown


passing shadows
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3 posted 2003-05-13 02:09 AM


you and me both sweetie...I know how that is
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4 posted 2003-05-13 06:57 AM


This is a lovely poetic rendering of some truly  heartfelt thoughts, Sue...
NewEnglandlazurlu
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5 posted 2003-05-13 10:09 AM


I have been thinking of you in light of all the tornadoes out your way. I am happy to see one of your posts, as it means you are well and safe.

Sending some sunshine to cheer your day.  Huggles, Marti

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