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zenny
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since 2002-11-24
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Belgium

0 posted 2003-05-12 05:51 PM


A wall of past defends my core
guard my heart from being sore
Shatterproof it was defined
Stored safe away from rough mankind

Bygone days build up this fort
Who could get in
              would be adored
Few have tried
              most resigned
but now that's past
              it's all behind

Someone searched and found the key
achieved to touch that heart of me
A will as strong as fortress walls
A love which plead to hear his calls

He came to me and showed me love
he made me hear the song of doves
My heart still hold by ancient fence
Now has pure love as it's defense



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QjQ
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since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756
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1 posted 2003-05-12 06:04 PM


well thought and written

It matters not how you answer, It matters only that i hear you.

Justbleu
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Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)
2 posted 2003-05-13 09:06 AM


Very nice....
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown


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