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0 posted 2003-05-12 12:56 PM



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**~**
The beat
of our two hearts
is in perfect rhythm
Beating  separately........in  sync
Our hearts are so bonded they are as one
Space between makes no difference
We  are  never apart
We  always  feel
The beat
**~**




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1 posted 2003-05-12 01:06 AM


very nice write and pic!!!!

It matters not how you answer, It matters only that i hear you.

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2 posted 2003-05-12 02:18 AM


QjQ, thank you. I appreciate that.

"To be in love with love is truly to love".....by Paladin
~with heart hugs from Ethel__GG~  
                  

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3 posted 2003-05-12 03:47 AM


beautiful Ethel, as always
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4 posted 2003-05-12 11:15 AM


Dixie, I'm glad that you liked it.
Hugs,
Ethel

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5 posted 2003-05-12 03:56 PM


Ok...This one really speaks to me!!!  I know of these types of connections with someone!!!!  No matter the distance they are there!!!!  
I love rictameters and what you did with this one!!!!
Enjoyed!!!!!
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown


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6 posted 2003-05-12 04:15 PM


Thank you, Bridgette. I love rictameters, too.
They are so much fun to do. I just wish
that I could learn to rhyme them and still
get my thoughts across.
Hugs,
Ethel  

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7 posted 2003-05-12 04:40 PM



Ethel...
you can do it...
the rhyming part I mean...
I know you can....
Just try

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8 posted 2003-05-12 04:57 PM


Karilea, thanks for the vote of confidence. I've tried some, but not really hard. It's just so much easier without rhyming. But, I think that I will like the finished results if I will just do it.
Thanks.  
Hugs,
Ethel

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9 posted 2003-05-12 04:58 PM


That was neat!--and I liked the beat!

Warm hugs,
Linda

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10 posted 2003-05-12 05:17 PM


Thanks, Linda. I like the beat, too.  
Hugs,
Ethel

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11 posted 2003-05-12 09:17 PM


I love this - Perfect picture too!

Melissa

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12 posted 2003-05-12 09:25 PM


And the beat goes one... Nice, Ethel...
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13 posted 2003-05-12 11:34 PM


Thank you, Melissa. I'm glad that
you like it.
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Yep, Nan, the beat goes on. LOL
Thanks for your reply.  
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Hugs to you both,
Ethel

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14 posted 2003-05-13 07:54 AM


Beautiful!
Eric

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15 posted 2003-05-13 08:47 AM


Thank you very much, Eric.
I'm glad that you like it.

"To be in love with love is truly to love".....by Paladin
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16 posted 2003-05-13 07:48 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwwwww, this is such a beautiful poem that made me cry in joy imagining my dream girls heart beating to mine! (kiss on cheek) The picture is sooooooo adorable just like your words, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful ehart, sweet Ethel, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

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17 posted 2003-05-13 07:51 PM


A little mushy for my taste but I actually liked it....very nice
Joe


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18 posted 2003-05-13 10:36 PM


Mine makes more of a crackle like broken glass..then goes dead for a few seconds.. that's healthy right?
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19 posted 2003-05-14 01:11 AM


Noah, thank you for your sweet reply!  
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Joe, I'm glad that you liked it, even though it was mushy. LOL  
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Raph, just what are we going to do with you?  LOL   By the way, Gary makes my heart skip a beat lots of times, even though his skips at the same time. So, they are still in sync.  
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Heart hugs to you all,
Ethel

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