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Tim Senior Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 1794 |
There's something perverse in a registered nurse, Who says close your eyes, I've got a surprise, Then jabs with a vengeance, Right in the assonance. My darling wife is a registered nurse, If she reads this poem, you might hear a curse, It won't come from her, but rather from me, Because our old sofa, is lumpy you see. Connie, I'm sorry, I beg your forgiveness, Tim you are hopeless, a pain in the assonance. |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
cute lines  It matters not how you answer, It matters only that i hear you. |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Yes, very cute...  Hugs, Ethel |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
hehehe... |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
 ...Butt Tim... She's only trying to help... |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Tim...no one with a sense of humor like yours, is hopeless!! |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
It won't hurt really it won't..... LOL!!!! A very cute poem..... Bridgette "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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FlyingCloud Member
since 2003-04-28
Posts 151A little place inside my head |
Very cute! +Genuine poetry can communicate before it is understood.+ |
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