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zenny
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since 2002-11-24

Posts 371
Belgium

0 posted 2003-05-11 03:01 PM

T winkels of love smoothen my face
W hen I recall our loving embrace
I nnocence gone, grown up and all
N ever regret loves special call
K nocked down by feels, out in the dark
L urking emotions, set to embark
E nter the world of give and receive
S teady but sturdy, sometimes naive

[This message has been edited by zenny (05-11-2003 03:01 PM).]

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Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

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Eternity

1 posted 2003-05-11 03:06 PM

This is very well done! And I love the content, sweet memories. Beautiful!
Love, Margherita

Midnitesun

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Gaia

2 posted 2003-05-11 08:19 PM

yes, love is the ultimate expression of give and receive

passing shadows
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displaced

3 posted 2003-05-12 04:32 AM

Justbleu
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Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)

4 posted 2003-05-12 03:40 PM

I love the title.....
Very nice poem!!!!
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown

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