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Margherita
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Eternity

0 posted 2003-05-11 02:53 PM



Photo by Tony Howell

Come!


I see you soaring high
as majestic as the Eagle
riding the currents of love
in circles you dance
displaying pure grace.

My yearning heart
watches in awe.

I find you in the vastness
of the Sea gliding through
the mystical depths of blue
as magnetic as a dolphin or a wale
you pierce my heart with your song.

With you I want to sail
let me share in your bliss.

You are the magical breeze
playing cheerfully with the clouds
blowing them into new shapes
and to the delight of the trees
tenderly you caress their leaves.

I want to join this ballet
invite me, please!

The night speaks of you in sparkles,
the glittering stars and the moon
touch my lips with beams of gold,
I am pervaded by a heavenly tune
all your whispered secrets unfold.

My soul aches to be One
don’t wait any longer, come!

© Copyright 2003 Margherita Rueger - All Rights Reserved
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
1 posted 2003-05-11 03:02 PM


Oh my..oh my yes Margherita!!
Beautiful indeed...very much enjoyed..
and the picture is spectacular!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Ericc
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2 posted 2003-05-11 07:57 PM


Aahhhh...what a beautiful invitation!
Love,
Eric

Etain
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since 2003-02-22
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The moon...
3 posted 2003-05-11 09:29 PM


Ahh, this is lovely, Margherita,
as all your poems beautiful soul.
A warm hug!!
Etain.

Magnus
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4 posted 2003-05-11 09:41 PM


IF this doesn't get attention....call EMS,
the person in question is dead!!!

Nicely done...

Patricia
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Missouri
5 posted 2003-05-11 10:00 PM


This is exquisite...soft, yet passionate.  I have that same calming effect that ericc's writings provide me.  The images are spectacular.  I think of my lost love here, and how I would love to beckon him to "Come."

-Patricia

Martie
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6 posted 2003-05-11 10:13 PM


Very beautiful, soft and romantic!
Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now
7 posted 2003-05-11 10:36 PM


Margherita - this is the most beautiful invitation I've ever had. Thank you, all I ask is when...

BC

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8 posted 2003-05-11 11:32 PM




(sigh) Oh Margherita, this is beautiful, sweet friend, what a wonderful welcoming that is that I know no one could deny! (kiss on cheek) I love this, sweet friend, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Margherita, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

passing shadows
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displaced
9 posted 2003-05-12 04:03 AM


wow! very powerful!
JamesMichael
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10 posted 2003-05-12 07:55 AM


Consider yourself invited...James
El_Campeador
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since 2003-01-29
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Ohio, USA
11 posted 2003-05-12 08:55 AM


Lovely, Margherita. I have yet to find "that one", and this poem touched my heart today. I look forward to the day when I can say "Come!"

Blessings,

El Campeador

“We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
12 posted 2003-05-12 08:58 AM


This was food for my soul! Thank you for the delectable meal!

Love & Light,
Linda

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