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Amature2
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0 posted 2003-05-11 02:41 PM



In The way

Pardon my intrusion
Didn’t mean to get in they way
Sometimes I feel I cloud up
A sunny day
Please excuse my inconsiderate self
I will just put it back on the shelf

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Margherita
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1 posted 2003-05-11 02:57 PM


Very lovely and ironical.
It happens that we feel like this. But with your words you just gave me a gift: a smile!
Thank you.
Love, Margherita

Midnitesun
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Gaia
2 posted 2003-05-11 08:23 PM


LOL, some days I want to shelf myself too!
(don't be too hard on yourself though)

passing shadows
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displaced
3 posted 2003-05-12 04:31 AM


hey, me too
Justbleu
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4 posted 2003-05-12 03:42 PM


I know the feeling.....
This is a cool poem!!!!
Enjoyed!!!!
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown


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