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Bill Charles
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0 posted 2003-05-11 01:17 PM


“ENCHANTING BLUE EYES”
by Bill Charles
~~~~
As you lie gracefully, and close by my side,
my eyes perceive you only as I do,
I see a delicate angel somewhere from the stars,
with those enchanting eyes,
of tantalizing blue...

Reminds me of precious diamonds sparkling in the sun,
I don’t know how I’m so enticed, when near, or apart,
for when they stare at me they go from front to back,
like an arrow that went,
all the way through my heart...

Heaven they were made in with colors of the sky,
always gently compelling, and continuing to sustain,
piercing they are, a different blue when I touch,
presenting this most seductive look,
which I surely can’t explain...

Various shades of blue, the magic of their beauty,
captivated am I, for this is what they do,
knowing you is precious, blindness won’t stop me,
from my ever seeing,
another loving look from you...

I stare into and see all of my sorrow that’s passed,
as they talk to me with their love and devotion,
the future I then see, and a smile lights my face,
for the deepness of your eyes,
is my abdication...

When I’m with you and near I think of no other,
there is no one that comes close to cloud my mind,
for your eyes of such loveliness would I ever wander,
over time and space,
would eternity be so kind...

My soul is hypnotized, and senses are enraptured,
by their unique softness, yet they’re so very sublime,
they draw me closer to you into a tight embrace,
and they do this to me,
all of the time...

Tenderness is your beauty, it comes from deep within,
my passions you have captured, and I know of no cure,
you are the most sensuous woman I have ever known,
with the charm and allure,
of your
enchanting blue eyes...
~~~~~


[This message has been edited by Bill Charles (05-11-2003 01:17 PM).]

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Margherita
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Eternity
1 posted 2003-05-11 01:32 PM


Ah dear Bill those blue eyes really hold a spell on you! So beautifully romantic and so full of gratitude and adoration!
Love, Margherita

Startime55
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2 posted 2003-05-11 01:35 PM


Sensually captivating....filled with the all the love that fills your heart....She inspires you endlessly so for her all who read your words are greatful...

Frank Tymon
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since 2003-05-11
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California, USA
3 posted 2003-05-11 01:57 PM


Enchanting blue eyes. To have experienced them is, I suspect, to have lived.
One day I'll post "Lovely, Lonesome Eyes," that parallel ( I fear, less well) the thought expressed here.

ctowen
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since 2001-10-18
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Green Mountains of VT
4 posted 2003-05-11 02:13 PM


Simply spellbinding!!!!
  An excellent read.

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
5 posted 2003-05-11 02:16 PM


Your best yet Bill...
Lucky lady she is...my eyes are green!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Earth Angel
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6 posted 2003-05-11 02:42 PM


Lucky is she with the eyes of blue that you adore! --Oh, I have blue eyes!--but alas, they are aqua blue, not baby blue...

She is the envy of many of your avid readers!

Have a glorious day--and night!
EA


regards2you
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since 2002-10-01
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California
7 posted 2003-05-11 02:49 PM


Bill,

Well, drats, here I sit with green eyes and do I feel envious... grins


Lovely, lovely poem. Romantic as ever.
Hugs, Pat



Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
8 posted 2003-05-11 04:42 PM


Bill,
Did she read this, well she should. Good write.

Magnus
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9 posted 2003-05-11 05:12 PM


Yes,  must be read....by the author...as
he gazes into those blues..

Nicely done BC..

Patricia
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since 2003-04-06
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Missouri
10 posted 2003-05-11 05:23 PM


Oh Bill.  This was unbelievable.  You really did it this time.  I hope her baby blues always do this for you.  Hey, go to her now, look in her eyes and write another poem for me, please!

-Patricia

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11 posted 2003-05-11 07:53 PM






(smiles) Awwwwwwwwww, I have blue eyes too and in my dreams I dream my girl usually has Spanish eyes that are like chocolate or mocha! (big hugggsssssss) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, may your blue-eyed love dove always bring joy to your heart, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shien upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

passing shadows
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12 posted 2003-05-12 04:34 AM


what a piece! wonderful job! I like this style of you
Nan
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13 posted 2003-05-12 08:12 AM


Familiarly Enchanting, dear BCI...
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