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Athi
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0 posted 2003-05-04 02:17 AM


Close your eyes and go beyond this world
Behind the eyes, there lies a world only for those who dream
It’s a place where you can be what you want to be
It’s a place where you can have all the things that you dreamt
It’s a place where you can always get back
Just by a blink of an eye

Yea, it’s a dream,
Yet so real, making me realize, this is my chance to live it
As I lie in my bed
I think back of the dream I had just now
Thinking how it would be like to spend my entire life in a dream

People may think of me as crazy
But who cares,
Little do they know that they are also living in a dream
And a day will come, when they will go back to sleep
A painful sleep,
And with a sudden call they will wake up,
Realizing how they’ve wasted their chance
It’s no more a dream now,
But an eternal life, a life where there’s no turning back
A life where you’re judged on how you lived your dream.


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passing shadows
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1 posted 2003-05-05 04:38 AM


wonderful piece! very wise words...I enjoyed this very much
quatro
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2 posted 2003-05-05 11:48 PM


It's strange how dreams are.  They can be a figment of your imagination, but magically they can come alive as a result of one following their dream to reality.

Good job.

quatro

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passing shadows
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4 posted 2003-05-10 03:08 PM


"But an eternal life, a life where there’s no turning back
A life where you’re judged on how you lived your dream."

that says so much! nice, very nice!

passing shadows
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5 posted 2003-05-11 03:44 AM


I thought we lost this one...whew!
Athi
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6 posted 2003-05-11 03:46 AM


thanx to u passing shadows.. keeps me going in this place hehe
JamesMichael
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7 posted 2003-05-12 07:50 AM


Enjoyed...James
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