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Open Poetry #26

Reconstruction

D.Lester Young
Senior Member

since 2001-12-08

Posts 1219
Austin, Tx

0 posted 2003-06-02 09:23 PM

The mind floats over
a universe of wild flowers,
blankets of sensual pleasure,
rippling spiritual contentment,
fragrance enveloping rapture,
music of a beating heart,
singing in a dance
of exquisite colors.

Waves upon a serene lake,
memorizing notes
of tranquility,
crystal clear refractions,
deep thinking roots
of your immorality,
the purpose of being.

The blue sky of escape,
breezes releasing the trauma
of needless complexity,
medicinal cleansing
purging the soul
of its shackles,
the gravity of having
lived imprisoned.

Bouquet of your independence,
blossoming in a special arrangement,
new found mental stimulus’s,
magnificent textures of originality,
the creativity of renewal,
a uniquely reconstructed personality,
the inner fire of warmth
of living life’s pleasures so freely,
in your own special way,
the gift of seeing
yourself blessed in His graces.

D.Lester Young
Somewhere in America not on company time 05/27/03

whiskey

Senior Member

since 1999-12-28

Posts 1278
Australia

1 posted 2003-06-02 10:25 PM

Lovely piece, very well written

I enjoyed reading it very much thankyou

Julie

"Dont cry because its over, smile because it happened. "

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

2 posted 2003-06-02 10:27 PM

This is so true. I enjoyed the read.

Cold hands means a warm heart

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

3 posted 2003-06-02 10:55 PM

"The mind floats over
a universe of wild flowers,
blankets of sensual pleasure,
rippling spiritual contentment,
fragrance enveloping rapture,
music of a beating heart,
singing in a dance
of exquisite colors."

Richly stated...and so beautifully done!!

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2003-06-03 02:58 AM

can't pick a favorite line...well done!

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