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This is Our Edge
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This is Our Edge |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
This is the edge. My finger trails slow across the crest of your desires - Tracing to a farther memory the smooth ride of your skin. We breath this movement to the holy stillness of a moment. And here...we linger. This is our edge. From this point on...we may only surrender to the coming fall. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Yes... it's quiet, this echoes... this is. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Where did I leave my fan? Beautifully written. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
You are a masterpoet of sacred moments of magical stillness .... this lingering is heaven. I see the fall as falling into each other... the edge stretches into untold heights... Love, Margherita  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wonderful write! I love your style |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Shhhh....I don't want anything to break the feeling this left me with.... ~Soft smiles, Nancy~ |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) This is beautiful, sweet friend, so that is why they call it falling, eh? (big hugggsssssss) This is soooooo passionately gorgeous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eric, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
and here . . . we linger . . . Mannn Ericc - that is the best part though bittersweet lovely xxoo |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Eric~ The entirety of this piece leaves a quiet feeling with this reader~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Thanks, I needed your writing today. It is soothingly romantic. You again awaken that something which is forgotten in the midst of two children who won't behave and loads of laundy and the dusting that needs to be finished. And of course a soon-to-be ex-husband who I wish were light years away... You did it again. Take me away with your words Ericc. -Patricia |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Ericc - nice write, enjoyed... BC |
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cinnamongirl Member
since 2003-02-02
Posts 217 |
This is incredibly beautiful; the sweetest of longing... the most delicious, gentle sensuality... and breathtaking surrender to love. Leave it to you to bring it forth in such an amazing, soulful, spiritual, profoundly touching way... so that we can all truly feel it. You are genuinely blessed with a wonderful gift... and we are blessed that you choose to share. Thank you... I love you, Moca |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
nicely penned  |
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