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Peter J Marcroft
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since 2003-02-02
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York, England

0 posted 2003-05-10 05:21 AM


Eden


My eyes roll across this land so green,
Holding this memory I know,
This life now so serene,
May it forever in me grow.

Piece of body, piece of mind,
They are mine to keep,
As I remain in this place I find,
I do not have the heart to weep.

This paradise is all mine,
To cherish and love,
A feeling truly divine,
Like the wings of a dove

I am free, I am one, I am whole,
There is no burden of strife,
Here in this place that has been my goal,
Throughout my long suffering lifeā€¦


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dani
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since 2003-05-10
Posts 46

1 posted 2003-05-10 05:35 AM


wow
that was beautiful

i'll live a lie until i die or until you work out why

Justbleu
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since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)
2 posted 2003-05-10 08:29 AM


Very nice....
Sounds like happiness and contentment to me!!!!  
Enjoyed!!!!
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown


Peter J Marcroft
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Posts 265
York, England
3 posted 2003-05-10 10:13 AM


Glad you both liked it, thanks for reading.
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