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vandana
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0 posted 2003-05-09 08:20 PM



You are gone
Far away
Now I know
I won't bother you
anymore
I won't even ask you
If you were my love
I will pretend
you were here
beside me
I miss those arms around me
I know
It won't come back to me
It Is all gone
Our love Is over
I won't ask you
If you were my love
I will forget
all the memories
I had long ago
long ago
You used to know me
But It seems like love
has vanished in the sky
I won't ask
If I want to fly
In a sky
I won't ask
If you were my love
I will keep dreaming
you were just my dream
You were just a picture
I dream of
I know
you won't come back to me

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Enchantress
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Canada eh.
1 posted 2003-05-09 08:43 PM


Oh this is so heartbreaking a read Vandana!
I hope things get better for you!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Sonic
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since 2003-05-06
Posts 13
Victoria, Australia
2 posted 2003-05-09 08:44 PM


Sometimes I wonder if love is just a dream.
This is a great piece of writing Vandana.
I feel the pain.
Phil


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3 posted 2003-05-10 03:25 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh Vandana, this is so very heartfelt, sweet friend, he may not come back to you but know life is so much larger than you think and out there is a special someone who is far more real than that picture! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet firend, I send angel hugs your way, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vandana, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

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