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Lady In White

Member Elite

since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

0 posted 2003-05-09 04:25 PM

Time, tide
Evermore
In their return

                                      Dusk, dawn
                                      Gradual in their
                                      Give and take of light

                                                                                        Little by little
                                                                                        Blood ties
                                                                                        Bond me to you

This love
Forever
Is yours alone

                                      Initials entwined
                                      Till the oak rots
                                                CK
                                                   JL

                                                                                        Lungs go dry
                                                                                        Hearts stop
                                                                                        We cease to be

I will meet you
In Forever, Evermore

[This message has been edited by Sunshine (05-09-2003 05:07 PM).]

scorpio
Member Ascendant

since 2002-10-02

Posts 5178
right...there

1 posted 2003-05-09 04:32 PM

The presentation of this poem is very intriquing...well done..

believe in what your heart feels...

Justbleu
Member Elite

since 1999-08-31

Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)

2 posted 2003-05-09 04:33 PM

I do love the format and the poetry!!!!
Much enjoyed!!!!
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2003-05-09 04:39 PM

Very beautiful in words and presentation dear Lady.
This also left a lump in my throat and a tear in my eye.
Be well..be happy.
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2003-05-09 07:11 PM

simply wonderful! awesome job!

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

5 posted 2003-05-09 07:31 PM

This poem flows like arms entwined around strong roots . Beautiful!
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

6 posted 2003-05-09 07:35 PM

A most beautiful and unique poem of love
and commitment...evermore...Very nice Lady.

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

7 posted 2003-05-09 08:00 PM

enjoyed this

kayjay
Member Elite

since 2002-06-24

Posts 2015
Oregon

8 posted 2003-05-09 08:00 PM

A pledge of eternal love from a good woman is a true gift. It only needs the balancing response. KJ

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

9 posted 2003-05-09 09:22 PM

Very, very nice sweet Lady. hugs, Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....

-Emily Dickinson

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

10 posted 2003-05-10 08:27 AM

K~
It's just beautiful~
A lovely flow of thoughts~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

11 posted 2003-05-10 03:40 PM

(smiles) Oh my gosh, I love this, sweet friend, there truly are bloodlines in love and may all the veins meld together and make rich thick blood that shines forevermore! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

Startime55
Member Elite

since 2003-04-05

Posts 2148
Alberta, Canada

12 posted 2003-05-10 07:30 PM

*Evermore* Written with style and heart....Well done...

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