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Eliza
Member

since 2002-11-18

Posts 58

0 posted 2003-05-09 11:29 AM

When paper roses are issued
Via mindful thoughts from you
Common sense then brings us near
For quiet thoughts you seem to hear.

You say they are just “black and white
But I hope they soon see you right,
They’re a poor excuse,” no, not true,
These paper roses sent from you.

They fill my mind with colored spree,
Times well spent in your company,
They do not die but live life full
Threading thoughts with the softest pull.

When paper roses are issued
I think of all the times with you.

[This message has been edited by Eliza (05-09-2003 11:34 AM).]

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2003-05-09 11:38 AM

Eliza..so very very pleasurable to see you here.
What a lovely thoughtful write.
Much enjoyed and a keeper for my library.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2003-05-09 01:00 PM

Eliza~
This is certainly beautiful !

The title caught my eye, because I've just returned from the area Nurseries with three lovely purchases (a Mother's Day gift from my sweetie) of Jackson Perkins Roses.

And truth be told ... I love paper roses 'almost' as much~

A lovely poetic penning~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2003-05-09 01:27 PM

a little sad but so very beautiful!

Justbleu
Member Elite

since 1999-08-31

Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)

4 posted 2003-05-09 05:38 PM

A very wonderful write.....
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

5 posted 2003-05-09 05:52 PM

They fill my mind with colored spree,
Times well spent in your company,
They do not die but live life full
Threading thoughts with the softest pull.

When paper roses are issued
I think of all the times with you.

Eliza, this is so beautiful. I felt so much
love in it. Very full of heart. :heart;
Hugs,
Ethel

Pell
Member

since 2001-09-16

Posts 134
Pacific NW

6 posted 2003-05-09 05:52 PM

Ah, roses, in two dimensions or three- both are sweet reminders that you`re in someone`s thoughts.

Nice warm smile from me on this one, beautiful

kayjay
Member Elite

since 2002-06-24

Posts 2015
Oregon

7 posted 2003-05-09 08:04 PM

There is a touch of bittersweet, as of one lost, but still held most dear? Well done. KJ

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

scorpio
Member Ascendant

since 2002-10-02

Posts 5178
right...there

8 posted 2003-05-09 08:31 PM

Eliza...black or white..alive or paper...a rose is a rose is a rose..

believe in what your heart feels...

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