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HopeS
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0 posted 2003-05-09 11:13 AM



By Thoughts Desired

His catch up notes
Appease and pacify
With just a few lines
He called to say hi !

I was in his thoughts
He wrote me to say
He had been busy
All work and no play

In the greeting card  
His idea was great
Sharing those times
We both appreciate

Different time zones
Being oceans apart
He can always find
The way to my heart

By uplifting my heart
In  thoughts desired
I am wearing smiles
He lovingly inspired

           Hope ©2003

© Copyright 2003 HopeS - All Rights Reserved
Eliza
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1 posted 2003-05-09 11:26 AM



Notes are very special, aren't they?
A nice writing, Hope.  Thank you.

Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 2003-05-09 11:29 AM


HopeS
A lovely write, enjoyed.

HopeS
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3 posted 2003-05-09 11:32 AM


thanks Eliza , yes especially notes from someone special I had been waiting for
Hope

HopeS
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4 posted 2003-05-09 11:33 AM


thank you Seymour , yes getting this mail today inspired me to write
Hope

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5 posted 2003-05-09 01:46 PM


nice
kayjay
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6 posted 2003-05-09 02:17 PM


When oceans divide
the letters decide
how hearts will glide
on a cupid's ride.

Nicely written!  Ken J

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

garysgirl
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7 posted 2003-05-09 02:46 PM


By uplifting my heart
In  thoughts desired
I am wearing smiles
He lovingly inspired



Hope, you know that I know...
Hugs,
Ethel

Patricia
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8 posted 2003-05-10 07:32 AM


This is very sweet.  I have received those "just to say hi" notes as well.  For me, it seems they appease for fleeting moments but always leave me longing for more.

You reminded me of my lost love who sent these little notes frequently.  I miss our correspondance.  Now I think, indeed, one of those "just to say hi" would be enough me.

Good write,
Patricia

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9 posted 2003-05-10 08:41 AM


This is very nice.....
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown


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10 posted 2003-05-10 09:18 AM


enjoyed
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