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icebox
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in the shadows

0 posted 2003-05-08 10:40 PM



When you climb on me
a throaty woman growls
and rides me,
I am a tree
taken by a storm wind
shaken to its roots;

when you fall on me
in tiny child whispers
you are done,
I am the earth
holding you safe,
welcoming you home.


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Honeybunch
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1 posted 2003-05-09 12:34 PM


To feel like that at a time like that is amazing!  
littlewing
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2 posted 2003-05-09 02:58 AM


ice:

a most poetic description of
a beautiful moment

nicely done xxoo

passing shadows
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displaced
3 posted 2003-05-09 03:45 AM


whew! it's hot in here...
icebox
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in the shadows
4 posted 2003-05-09 09:45 AM


Thank you for your kind comments.  I hope you all have a wonderful weekend.
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5 posted 2003-05-10 12:45 PM


Now that was making a metaphor meltdown for sure! Enjoyed this very much, and love how your mind worked in this one.

                     

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6 posted 2003-05-10 12:59 PM






(smiles) Awwwwwwww, I love the wonderful feelings you conjure about love, sweet friend, it is like a seed to the earth that blooms not annually but perennially and can hope so many other things! (big hugggsssssss) May your love always be sheltered upon your Earth, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

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