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Lost Summer Days
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Lost Summer Days |
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jaysh Member
since 2003-04-16
Posts 133IL, USA 
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"Lost Summer Days" By: Janna Shaffer Age: 14 As you sit in the warm, but tickling summer grass, Your hair faintly blows in the wind, and waves about in the air, as if it could fly, Just to look up into the sky, on a summer day, Takes all our thoughts and worries away. Sitting there, the two of us hand in hand, our silence isn’t overwhelming, because we both know we want to stay like this forever, Lost in the heat of a beautiful day, Looking in your eyes, you take my breath away. The bright sun beats down on both of us, and the heat makes us drowsy, but yet the moment is perfect, The day swallows us whole, as if we already knew, I hope everyday, like this, I spend with you. |
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JingleBear Member
since 2003-05-08
Posts 76Pennsylvania, USA |
Very impressive. I am 14, too! Nice work! |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Janna: I just wrote about this very same thing I know exactly how you feel nice write xxoo |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Janna that is a very nice poem... I couldn't have wrote it better myself... Great Job! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 wonderful! |
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jaysh Member
since 2003-04-16
Posts 133IL, USA |
thank you, Im glad you all enjoyed littlewing: I will have to read your poem sometime!  |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Janna - it is in here somehwere open "If Only" I swear we were in each others heads . . . |
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