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termite
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since 2003-04-29
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0 posted 2003-05-08 08:32 PM


summer's almost gone
days in water and sun and
marijuana
iced tea and lemonade
futility blowing in the summer breeze

there's always an adventure that doesn't exist
there's always cells to feed
watermelon and hamburgers
alcohol and nicotine

summer's almost gone

there's always that adventure
there's always that high
but where does it go
just where does it go
where do i grow
when the summer dies

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passing shadows
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1 posted 2003-05-09 05:03 AM


kind of sad, but i like it
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2 posted 2003-05-09 11:52 PM


....pssssst....California........


Well written, young feller....I like your style!

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Justbleu
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Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)
3 posted 2003-05-10 12:26 PM


I really like this.....
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown


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