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Shyann2003
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0 posted 2003-05-08 08:25 PM



Dear Friend

Friend, you mean everything to me
I just wish I could of told you that
But it is way to late, and your
already gone
I wish that I was there
I wish that I could tell you everything
that I neve had a chance to say
There is just so much pain and way too
much sadness
I have been trying to get over
you but every time i see your
face or hear your name, I start to cry
Every night I pray and make a
wish on just one little star that
I would be there with you. I always
woundered what was on your mind. Sometimes
I look up at the sky an ask "Why?"
There is just one thing that I want
you to do is promise me that when my
time comes, will you wait up there for me?


© Copyright 2003 Shyann2003 - All Rights Reserved
jaysh
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1 posted 2003-05-08 08:31 PM


beautiful, and I hope you find your friend...or at least find there heart, great way of expressing yourself through poetry, keep up the good work!
Magnus
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2 posted 2003-05-08 08:39 PM


This is sad,  too true for so many...myself
included,  but it is certainly a piece of
yourself...that is expressed very beautifully.

Welcome to Passions...

regards2you
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3 posted 2003-05-08 10:01 PM



~Welcome to Passions~

Heartfelt here. A wonderful first post. Look forward to more of your poetry.

Hugs, Pat


Earth Angel
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4 posted 2003-05-08 10:17 PM


Shyann, welcome to Passions! Your debut poem is a real tear-jerker! Powerful yet sensitively written. Sad, but very beautiful.

Warm welcoming hugs,
Earth Angel

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5 posted 2003-05-08 10:21 PM


WELCOME TO PASSIONS !!
ENJOYED YOUR FIRST POST.
CHRIS

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

littlewing
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6 posted 2003-05-08 11:05 PM


Shyann:

Welcome to PIP!
What a beautiful entrance
and your write  . . .
ahhh - we all know this I do believe

nice job
xxoo

Richy
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7 posted 2003-05-09 02:44 AM




Oh what a sad tragedy... one can really feel the sincerity in your writing...

I hope time helps...

It ususally does...


Welcome to PIP!


Richy


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8 posted 2003-05-09 03:43 AM


aw gawd! I love this!
passing shadows
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9 posted 2003-05-09 03:44 AM


Welcome to Passions!

Sunshine
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10 posted 2003-05-09 06:19 AM


Welcome to Passions, Shyann.  We always question our losses, and at times, we find our answers.  You're going to enjoy Passions...if you have any questions regarding our rules and guidelines, do not hesitate to ask.  In the meantime, please, check your E-mail for a Special Greeting!

Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen?

Justbleu
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11 posted 2003-05-09 11:07 AM


This is full of sadness but yet there remains a whispering hope!!!!
Welcome To Passions!!!!
Hope you enjoy it here!!!
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown


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12 posted 2003-05-10 12:29 PM




(big hugggsssssss) This is a sad but beautiful debut, dearest friend, I too think we question ever too much why the ones we love and cherish so dear have to go one time or another and though I know the aching will always be with you, that your friend will always love you and you will see your friend again, God Bless You, we are all here for you and send angel hugs your way! Welcome to Passions, sweet Shyann, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your lovely poetry, dearest friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Shyann, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

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13 posted 2003-05-10 11:09 AM


If you believe in another realm after this one, it's never too late to say the words I care, I love you, I forgive....or whatever was left unsaid on earth.

Welcome to Pips! celebrating your entrance to a new poetry home

[This message has been edited by Midnitesun (05-10-2003 11:10 AM).]

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