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Cheryl Flemming
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0 posted 2003-05-08 08:12 PM



Alone in this world, as she looks into space
The anguish shows clearly in her drawn face
Her gown embroidered with lace and gems
As she floats along, not knowing where she will end


Her life has been troubled, she has traveled far
The wounds on her mind, the scars in her heart
But never once has she given up or lost hope
For she has learned in this life, how to cope


The riverbank has a sweet lilac scent
As she approaches a turn just ahead
The sunset comes clearly into the view
As her heart is filled with thoughts so true


All that she owns she carries on her canoe
As she paddles along an enjoys the scenic view
The tears come as she sits by candlelight
As she stares into the lover’s moonlight


Is he out there looking for me?
Can it possibly be?
That he feels the loneliness inside me
And that I am the woman of his dreams


Come to me and fulfill my needs
Let me feel love burning inside of me
Touch me and give me sweet release
Come out of my dreams and give my heart peace!

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Ani Zen
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1 posted 2003-05-08 08:45 PM


Wow....A longing I know so well....you are so wonderfully descriptive in this piece.  Beautiful, absolutely beautiful, for it's simplicity, and for the images it conjures in the mind...thankyou for sharing


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just out of reach
2 posted 2003-05-08 10:29 PM


Oh, what a picture you do paint with your wonderful words. Thankyou for this. Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

Cheryl Flemming
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3 posted 2003-05-08 11:07 PM


Thank you so much Ani Zen and Nightshade for you very nice comments. I had not written in awhile and it feels so good to post again.
passing shadows
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4 posted 2003-05-09 04:42 AM


wonderfully written, thanks for sharing
Cheryl Flemming
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5 posted 2003-05-09 02:48 PM


Thank you Passing Shadow for your kind comment.
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