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0 posted 2003-05-08 07:24 PM





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Come sit beside me on the bench
Let us visit for awhile
It's good to see you well old chum
Warms my heart to glimpse your smile.

I've brought a basket full of goodies
Oh, I see you've brought one too !!
We'll have tea with lemon and a tart
This picnic in the park's long overdue.

Let's laugh about the days gone by
Feed the squirrels a bit of lunch
Take a stroll together arm in arm
Pick wildflowers by the bunch.

I'll make daisy chains for me and you
We'll gleefully wear them in our hair
Take a fantasy ride on the carousel
Our flowing skirts rippling in the air.

Let's watch the children on the swings
Their voices squealing with delight
Begging to go higher with each push
Like any moment they might take flight.

Come sit beside me on the bench
Our special day has neared it's end
I'm so grateful for our park of peace
And I am blessed to call you "friend."

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Chris Barker
~2002~


© Copyright 2003 Chris Barker - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-05-08 07:31 PM



AHA...so this is why you've been so quiet...
you've been composing!  And a mistressful piece it is!  I'll bring the aunts...

hugs

Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen?

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2 posted 2003-05-08 07:36 PM


This is so soft and delicate. A joy to read.
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3 posted 2003-05-08 07:43 PM


I will sit beside you on that bench
If you will spike the tea.
Oh my goodness Nightshade,
what a tea party that would be!

~* Congratulations on your milestone *~

You add so much to the forums in your poetry, work behind the scenes and positive friendship.

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4 posted 2003-05-08 07:48 PM




(does happy dance) Yay!!! Here's two golden hearts representing you and I as true friends forever, yay! Now let's go on the swings, I'll help push you up, yay! (kiss on cheek) This is soooooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, this is the perfect peaceful party to celebrate your ascendant 5000th post, yay, God Bless You, this is wonderful, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Chris, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

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5 posted 2003-05-08 07:48 PM


Oh my Chris...this is so lovely!
Congratulations on your milestone!!
~Hugs & Miss ya, Teed~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

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6 posted 2003-05-08 07:56 PM


Time flies when you're having fun, does it not?!?  
An exceptionally fine write to mark this milestone.

Congratulations, Chris! --and many happy returns to the blue pages!

Happy hugs,
Linda

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7 posted 2003-05-08 08:15 PM


Congratulations sweet lady!
What an awesome accomplishment!!

We'll have tea with lemon and a tart
Well, I just can't wait! This is going to be such fun.

Great poem, made me feel all warm and summery!  Hugs, Marti

Few are those who see with their own eyes and feel with their own hearts.  A.Einstein

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8 posted 2003-05-08 08:26 PM


Congratulations Chris....sorry .... I don't
wear a skirt...but I would surely jump on
that ride and sit there smiling with ya!!!

Very nicely done..

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You are all so kind - hugs !!

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10 posted 2003-05-08 10:23 PM



Chris,

I love this. Oh, what a fine day...

Your imagery, terrific....you took us there....

Congratulations

I always enjoy your work.

Hugs, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

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11 posted 2003-05-08 10:23 PM


Chris - and a special friend this must be...

BC

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12 posted 2003-05-08 10:32 PM


Pat & Bill, thankyou both so much. I consider you both friends of mine through Passions...so come on ... let's picnic in the park!! hugs!
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13 posted 2003-05-08 10:34 PM


Congradulations Chris! This is just beautiful.
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14 posted 2003-05-08 10:39 PM


Hi Sue!! Thankyou sweetie and I hope all is well with you. hugs!

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

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15 posted 2003-05-09 04:40 AM


aw Chris, this is so wonderful! Congrats on your 5000th!
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16 posted 2003-05-09 09:58 AM


passingshadows - thankyou for reading and commenting. hugs!

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

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17 posted 2003-05-09 01:32 PM


i love these kind of picnics and must protest to have a go at the swings! heee

happy 5000th!

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18 posted 2003-05-09 02:14 PM


Just as smooth and charming as warm cookies with milk!  This is a pleasure to read.  Ken

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The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

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19 posted 2003-05-09 02:15 PM


sweet, refreshing brings the sun out on this rainy miserable day!
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20 posted 2003-05-09 02:57 PM


Chris, I'll meet you all at the park. And, remember, the swings aren't just for kids. We're certainly going to have a lot of them, because there's a lot of us kida at heart here. I can only give us five on here, but maybe someone else can give us more swings? LOL
                

And, congratulations on 5000 posts, too!!

Hugs,
Ethel

[This message has been edited by garysgirl (05-09-2003 02:58 PM).]

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21 posted 2003-05-09 04:26 PM


Lovely and congratulations...James
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22 posted 2003-05-09 04:28 PM



I am very proud of you, my dear.

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23 posted 2003-05-09 06:06 PM


Chris, that is really beautiful! Friends make the best times!

~Elizabeth

Waited on a line of greens and blues, just to be the next to be with you..
~Mr. Big

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24 posted 2003-05-09 06:36 PM


Chris:

so very endearing - as always

CONGRATULATIONS!

this is beautiful
xxoo

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25 posted 2003-05-09 08:03 PM


congs on your 5000th post liked this a lot
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26 posted 2003-05-09 08:12 PM




HEARTY CONGRATS,
DEAR POET!!!

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27 posted 2003-05-09 09:11 PM




MY GOODNESS!! I FEEL SO BLESSED TO HAVE SUCH CARING FRIENDS HERE AT PASSIONS - THANKYOU
MANY HUGS TO ALL

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28 posted 2003-05-09 11:58 PM


Beautiful. It is always nice to talk with an old friend.
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