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Open Poetry #26

IT Won't Hurt (Edition)

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

0 posted 2003-05-08 07:05 PM

It won't hurt us
Anymore
Because everything is
goning to be alright
The days become night
And when you look
at yourself
You wIll find love
A true love
In your heart
What Iam saying to yes
Yes
It is true
what my heart tells you
Trust me
Come with me
I will take you
everywhere you want
to go
I will make love
to you
Because the years
We have been hurt
after so many years
Closer
than ever before
You can see that
the pain Is over
And now
It won't hurt us
anymore

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2003-05-08 07:54 PM

(big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, I just got finished reading Ethel's beautiful sentimental poem on true love and this also well relates to that sympathetic true love! (sigh) I know with all my heart you will find what your heart deserves, just always look to the sun, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vandana, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

regards2you
Member Elite

since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

2 posted 2003-05-08 10:30 PM

Vandana,

I like this. Such love you write.
Hugs, Pat

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2003-05-09 04:41 AM

I know how this feels very well...but my hurt always comes back even after the love is made...

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

4 posted 2003-05-10 05:41 AM

V:

Trust me
Come with me
I will take you
everywhere you want
to go

yes . . . take flight
I loved this
xxoo

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

5 posted 2003-05-10 05:53 AM

Nice positive strength in this piece and laced with heartfelt lines which is a good combination.

Eric

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

6 posted 2003-05-10 06:19 AM

Enjoyed...James

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