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Exploring Every Breath
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Exploring Every Breath |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
What the mirror tells When the surface will not show the depths inside As if the glass were wishing wells With everything not known or hidden in collide The being of me accolades In differences that certainly are not a normal find But I see deeper escapades While others seem to think they know my mind While taught and brought together In the gift of surface calm A soul of seas transcends the weather When small degrees disarm the storm Then all of how too temperate Unlikely, for the mold was broken on release A child’s eyes, yet woman in the temperament While small the candle inside burns in peace What’s most unlikely breathes The push and pull of grand surprise A searching on the inside seethes With but the vision to surmise Copyright Kkh 5/8/03 [This message has been edited by ThisDiamond (05-08-2003 07:41 PM).] |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
The mere sounds of the words you compose together, sound like a symphony... The addition of their meanings, balances genius with beauty... Your poetry, you, are to be held in awe! Richy [This message has been edited by Richy (05-08-2003 07:14 PM).] |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Then all of how too temperate Unlikely, for the mold was broken on release A child’s eyes, yet woman in the temperament While small the candle inside burns in peace What’s most unlikely breathes The push and pull of grand surprise A searching on the inside seethes With but the vision to surmise Kathleen, true poetry you have penned again.. just beautiful...  "To be in love with love is truly to love".....by Paladin ~with heart hugs from Ethel__GG~ [This message has been edited by garysgirl (05-08-2003 07:17 PM).] |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Muddy waters run deep....so do images in our mirror.... this is surely a fine example of "This Diamond" that graces our eyes with her beautiful poetic expression of her innerself and all of her that we admire.. |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Kathleen, Richy just said to you what I've been unable to say so perfectly all this time. This poem is so special; it honestly is awesome. Hugs, Pat  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
could not have said it any better myself! |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Kathleen: right here: A child’s eyes, yet woman in the temperament exactly - searching . . . nice write xxoo |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
BRAVO!!!This is a Stunning poem that is filled with the heart and soul of a woman who yet has the innocence of a child....I LOVE IT!!! [This message has been edited by Startime55 (05-10-2003 06:58 PM).] |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
ThisDiamond - I'm not sure why, but this is a little different from what I've read of yours. I like the way it reads... BC |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Wonderfuly expressed! Eric |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
I see a different sort of write here, introspective and thoughtful..it looks good...touche  |
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