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garysgirl
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0 posted 2003-05-08 06:53 PM



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When someone      anyone      falls in love
giving their heart to another      their all
with complete    
                 unreserved love
holding back  
                      nothing
with total trust
              in the other person
they are........

very hurt
          if.....

the other someone         anyone
does not return their love
                        in the same way

If the other someone       anyone
holds back        not giving their     all
their heart
         with complete
               unreserved love
Or if the other person
has made the someone lose trust in them
it      hurts

And.......

The hurt sometimes takes
       a while to go        away
so that the person can trust    again
To give their heart again
                          to another

But......

They will
          because that is who they are
and    who their Love is
someone       anyone
         like
   me     and     you
~~~~

                    




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1 posted 2003-05-08 06:59 PM


very touching. i can tell you write from your heart. that's not always easy to do. great job!

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Thank you, Peaceful Dreamer.
You're right, it's not easy to write of the
pain....yeat very easy to write of my Love and
our happiness. Thank you.

"To be in love with love is trul to love".....by Paladin
~with heart hugs from Ethel__GG~  
                  

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(big hugggsssssss) Oh Ethel, I can relate to this too well, for on New Years Day Joanna made her confession to me that she never loved me all those eight months I loved her and she had someone all along and as it breaks my heart soooooo much, I want to make some girl feel special and won't give up as I want to not be selfish and love someone all I can! (wipes tears) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ethel, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

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4 posted 2003-05-09 05:26 AM


You said it...James
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5 posted 2003-05-09 05:32 AM


I love how you do these!
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6 posted 2003-05-09 08:52 AM


Noah,
I know you are still hurting from the way you
were treated by Joanna. I hate it when people
plays with another person's heart. I've
never understood why they feel the need to do that.  

I really believe that one day you will meet and
fall in love with a wonderful woman who will love
you just as much as you love her. You really deserve
that, sweet friend.
Hugs,  
Ethel

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James,
I can tell from your poems that you understand
what I mean. I hope that you will find the right
person one day soon.

"To be in love with love is truly to love".....by Paladin
~with heart hugs from Ethel__GG~  
                  

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8 posted 2003-05-09 08:56 AM


Dixie, I'm glad that you like them. Thank you
for always reading and encouraging me. I really
do appreciate you, friend.  
Hugs,  
Ethel

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9 posted 2003-05-09 11:41 PM


Sweet....and so very true....

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10 posted 2003-05-10 11:39 AM


loved it
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11 posted 2003-05-10 11:45 AM


ah, the essence of unrequited LOVE
well written, Ethel
you write of both sides of love equally well

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12 posted 2003-05-10 01:16 PM


You have said it perfectly....sometimes the pain is hard to write but you have captured the way it can be...We must never stop giving love a chance for we never know when it will be giving us great joy to write about...I love to read of your happiness for it is like sharing the warmth and beauty of a sunbeam....

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