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scorpio
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0 posted 2003-05-08 06:25 PM



Illuminating

There is a light I see
Whenever she walks into a room.

It radiated from her soul
And fills even the darkest corners.

I tell her that she's the light of my life
But she just smiles and lights up my heart.

believe in what your heart feels...

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1 posted 2003-05-08 07:56 PM



Well, look at the lovely I found here.
You always gift us with such wonder-filled words dear Scorpio...
and these words of devotion are no exception.
She sure is one lucky lady!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~


~ I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before ~

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2 posted 2003-05-08 07:59 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, sometimes love simply doesn't need to be answered, just the smile alone can make a response that brings the light! (big hugggssssss) This is delightful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

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3 posted 2003-05-08 08:54 PM


I can truly understrand this "glow" you see. For me it's only visible in those who have a piece of my heart. Good Write, very well expressed. ~ Talia
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4 posted 2003-05-09 04:44 AM


beautiful!
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5 posted 2003-05-09 06:29 AM



It's because your visage is her mirror, and she, yours...with one candle in between.  The love you share seems uniquely hallowed, and approved by all that you quietly share it with.  Lovely, Scorpio - always lovely.

scorpio
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6 posted 2003-05-09 09:43 AM


Thank you Nancy...but I'm the lucky one...her smile means everything to me...I apppreciate your warm words...very much..

Yes Noah..the smile says so much...thank you..

Talia...the glow from our loves sustains us...I thank you for your reply..

Thanks passingshadows...glad you liked it..

Karilea...thank you for your words of support...I appreciate your comments...as always

believe in what your heart feels...

Eliza
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7 posted 2003-05-09 11:38 AM



This is lovely.
She is brilliant
because of your love.

scorpio
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8 posted 2003-05-09 04:09 PM


She does seem to like me around...*S*..thank you Eliza for commenting..

believe in what your heart feels...

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