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Open Poetry #26

Days of Fall

teenpoet
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since 2001-10-17

Posts 280
Michigan

0 posted 2003-05-08 11:01 AM

   Honeyed days of fall
Mellow out my anger
   Splashes of color
  Brighten the heights
Green seems to fade away
  Into a dreary brown
   But the flashing moments
   Of color widespread
Make full much more
Than just worthwhile
It makes it priceless

I don't know if today is a good day, or if yesterday was, or if tomorrow will be, but I'd like to think so.

[This message has been edited by teenpoet (05-08-2003 11:05 AM).]

Brad Majors

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since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

1 posted 2003-05-08 02:25 PM

I like it!

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2003-05-10 02:00 AM

(sigh) Autumn too always seems to make me sad when it comes, but then when I see the golden leaves it reminds me God is only testing us with the notion that things must pass but will always be re-born and many other blessings come in the colors the seasons bring! (big hugggssssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Alicia, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2003-05-10 05:14 AM

beautiful!

Justbleu
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since 1999-08-31

Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)

4 posted 2003-05-10 08:51 AM

Oh yes, my favorite season!!!!
I like your poem!!!!
Enjoyed!!!!
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown

QjQ
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since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

5 posted 2003-05-10 07:54 PM

well written

It matters not how you answer, It matters only that i hear you.

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

6 posted 2003-05-10 09:21 PM

teenpoet - one of your best that I've read, like this one a lot...

BC

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