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Whisper Wind
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Whisper Wind |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
Springtime is here, the mighty oak buds time sure does fly or is it the state of mind I am in that makes me want to die I feel like the lonesome sparrow that just lost her mate to slingshot of a boy Whispering wind, whispering wind tell me why, she had to go Oh, whispering wind, whispering wind my baby’s gone and I am alone you’re the one that can find her tell her, I still love her. Hear the lone wolf howling at the moon he is calling on the wind for his love so far away in need of the happiness they had found calling on the wind is my love still around? This he needs to know because he loves her so. Whispering wind, whispering wind tell me why, she had to go Oh, whispering wind, whispering wind my baby’s gone and I am alone you’re the one that can find her tell her, I still love her |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
This is so sad my heart can feel it intensely. And beautifully written...thanks for sharing, I hope that helps you. ~K~ |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
Kahlil, thank you. I wrote this in response to a song I was listening to. alan |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
My heart felt the pain of loss in this poem and goes out to you...I hope the Whispering Wind can soothe the hurt you feel.... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
It's been a long time, Alan... welcome home! |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
Thank you Startime, I am fine. Sunshine, iti s good to be here. I have missed the wonderful poets that are here. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
A heartsong sung sweetly TD |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Alan - it's amazing what one can write with an inspiration from somewhere, like a song... BC |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Alan Beautiful, heartfelt words that were very much enjoyed. Take care......Sue I am in motion |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh Alan, this is very sadly beautiful, sweet friend, I send heart hugs out to you and I wish true happiness to always be in your heart forever more, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Alan, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed this  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very touchingly sad to me |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
It is amazing what is whispered in the wind, whether it be the softness of a calm and gentle breeze or the howling often found in the minutes just before a thunderstorm. It is the "getting quiet with ourselves" when the answers come. Shhh...listen to the wind. The images you presented were seen vividly in mind. Very lovely in conception and flow. -Patricia |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I have the advantage of having read, in one of your replies, that you wrote this in response to a song you had been listening too---good! Now I'm not sad!  The song of the sparrow was whispering in the wind--and into my soul... Warm hugs, Linda |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Hi Alan! Welcome Home! Much enjoyed your song of whisper. Stay around this time okay? ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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