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Startime55
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since 2003-04-05

Posts 2148
Alberta, Canada

0 posted 2003-05-07 08:30 PM

The Soul That Wept

Sounds of nature bring her rest
as she closes eyes in thought
Her salty tears can attest
of the pain lost love has brought

A breeze that caresses face
reminds of a touch not felt
She goes to a hidden place
as singing words make her melt

The full moon creates a dream
of a time when much was shared
Forever will she now deem
no other love has compared

Loss flows from the soul that wept
for the treasure she had found
With the pain she will accept
unseen wisdom most profound

Startime

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

1 posted 2003-05-07 08:34 PM

Star - I love this - and know this much
too well sadly:

A breeze that caresses face
reminds of a touch not felt

nice writing xxoo

Alan
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since 2000-09-12

Posts 1499
right next door

2 posted 2003-05-07 08:40 PM

Beautiful writing Startime.
alan

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

3 posted 2003-05-07 08:47 PM

A very touching read. Hope all remains well
for you dear friend...

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

4 posted 2003-05-07 08:58 PM

Startime55 - these words touch me, hope all is well...

BC

whiskey

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since 1999-12-28

Posts 1278
Australia

5 posted 2003-05-07 09:12 PM

Beautiful piece. Very well written has great flow. I enjoyed it much

Julie

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

6 posted 2003-05-07 09:17 PM

StarTime~

'The full moon creates a dream
of a time when much was shared
Forever will she now deem
no other love has compared'

That just grabbed me and wouldn't let go~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

7 posted 2003-05-07 11:46 PM

Hello Startime

Your words were nothing short of breathtaking and I savoured every breath. Your words are good for the soul.

"Love is a power too strong to be
overcome by anything but flight"

Take care......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

8 posted 2003-05-07 11:49 PM

(big hugggsssssss) Yes, loss brings wisdom but moreover, life is not about loss and the wisdom will only lead you to the most gifted love of all! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is deep honest writing, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karen, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

vandana

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since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

9 posted 2003-05-08 07:09 PM

enjoyed

Nightshade

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since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

10 posted 2003-05-08 07:14 PM

Loss flows from the soul that wept
for the treasure she had found
With the pain she will accept
unseen wisdom most profound

Heartfelt, honest writing - love this !!
hugs, Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....

-Emily Dickinson

Cheryl Flemming
Member

since 2000-09-14

Posts 102

11 posted 2003-05-08 07:42 PM

So good to read your work again. Words that penetrate the soul. I hope all is well with you.

Duncan
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since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

12 posted 2003-05-08 08:33 PM

'A breeze that caresses face
reminds of a touch not felt
She goes to a hidden place
as singing words make her melt'

A whispering ache to this, soft and weeping...

Ani Zen
Junior Member

since 2003-05-08

Posts 12
Ottawa, Ontario, Canada

13 posted 2003-05-08 08:50 PM

This is a wonderful piece of writing...Beautifully written. I enjoyed reading this. Thankyou for sharing.

jaysh
Member

since 2003-04-16

Posts 133
IL, USA

14 posted 2003-05-08 08:58 PM

wow, i liked this poem alot, very touching. Keep up the good writing

Lost_Soul
Junior Member

since 2003-04-17

Posts 37
California, United States

15 posted 2003-05-09 11:53 PM

This is really really good. Very touching.

Ivy Rose
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since 2001-12-29

Posts 1300
MA, USA

16 posted 2003-05-10 12:56 PM

Startime...The loss of a love is anguish like no other. This poem is not only poignant; but deeply moving. I hope all is well with your heart. You are an exquisite writer and a beautiful soul. ***Ivy Rose

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

17 posted 2003-05-10 02:04 PM

So soft and tender, a whispered cry, understood.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

18 posted 2003-05-10 02:15 PM

sadly beautiful

QjQ
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since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

19 posted 2003-05-10 02:19 PM

nice write!!!

It matters not how you answer, It matters only that i hear you.

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