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The Holy Water of the Urban Shaman

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Effigy
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In the back left hand corner
of the parking lot
between tires edge, under
shadow of red steel and black rubber
an oily puddle collects lost
rainbows (an asphalt oasis).

The sole reflecting pond in a
parking lot jungle reflects concrete
intentions with a slightly greasy nature.


[This message has been edited by Effigy (05-07-2003 05:34 PM).]

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1 posted 05-07-2003 05:30 PM       View Profile for Brad Majors   Email Brad Majors   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Brad Majors

Very Cool
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I liked.

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thanks.
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And I say it again. You amaze me sometimes. I got though 10 to 12 mediocre poems, get about to the point where I'm getting bored, and you suddenly blow me out of the water again. This one is great. Heck, this one is PUBLISHABLE. That's my highest compliment.

I believe the most important component of a poem is rhythm. Rhythm is the heartbeat of a poem. It is what makes poetry poetry.

 
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