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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
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0 posted 2003-05-07 01:50 PM


Swelling victories painted soft against the rain
Innate, the flower of the spring to leaf so sure again
With such impatience, would a woman stand to be?
For there is something similar that must reside in me

Watchfully, each fluid wish seems pale and calm
And if I swallow them, would fuel ignite the coming storm?
With such predictions that seem bleak and out of reach
From inner gardens will the sun of day beseech?

Candidly, in former blooms auspicious times refrain
Swelling victories painted ever softly in the rain
With such impatience in the past, and such in deep abide
What could a woman yet become, from buds that leave inside?

Copyright Kkh 5/7/03


© Copyright 2003 Kathleen Harris - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-05-07 01:53 PM


With such impatience, would a woman stand to be?
For there is something similar that must reside in me


ah...to bud and bloom..
I would think you blossomed already and alive with green...

very nicely done...

Justbleu
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2 posted 2003-05-07 03:09 PM


This is very lovely....
Enjoyed!!!!
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown


Sunshine
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3 posted 2003-05-07 03:14 PM



You bloom ever well, Kathleen...

Ericc
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4 posted 2003-05-07 04:55 PM


Very lyrical and flowing...beautiful!
Eric

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