Describe The Universe (Inspired by Paladin)

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Open Poetry #26

Describe The Universe (Inspired by Paladin)

Jaime Fradera
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0 posted 2003-05-07 12:49 PM

Describe The Universe

The Universe is like a single’s bar
At five minutes to closing.
Any intelligent life here?

Jaime

Space is big.
Douglas Adams

passing shadows
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1 posted 2003-05-07 01:14 PM

*giggle*

j-oh-E
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2 posted 2003-05-07 01:41 PM

I can't say I like this one much. Although some may think differently, I think there's something lacking. A punchline maybe?

Midnitesun

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3 posted 2003-05-07 02:10 PM

LOL. I thought you were going to give Paladin the more expansive version, but this is perfect.
And of course, I'm currently reading Adams 'Hitchhikers Guide to the Galaxy.'

Yep space is pretty dang big.

now back to my 30 minute nap so I won't be spaced out at work later

bye

Sunshine

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4 posted 2003-05-07 02:21 PM

Earth Angel
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5 posted 2003-05-07 02:22 PM

That was really cute!

--and it was soooooo short! I thought I'd be reading your description of the Universe until the end of my days here on this earthly plane!

Love & Eternity,
EA

Ceinwyn
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6 posted 2003-05-09 01:32 PM

*giggles* I know really right!? lol

paladin

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7 posted 2003-05-10 04:07 PM

Reminds me of a line from a country song."The girls always get prettier at closing time".Always glad to inspire.DON'T PANIC.

paladin

....a knight without armor

Startime55
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since 2003-04-05

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8 posted 2003-05-10 07:28 PM

*giggling* oh my have you got this one right...Well said Jaime...

Richy
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9 posted 2003-05-10 07:36 PM

I thought, "Any intelligent life here?"

Was the punchline?

Hey, I saw Star Wars...

Richy

[This message has been edited by Richy (05-10-2003 07:37 PM).]

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