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CountryGal
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since 2003-03-09
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Missouri, USA

0 posted 2003-05-07 12:22 PM


A Friend

I want you to know that I'm glad we met
And to thank you for being a friend I found on the net
We shared stories both good and bad
We shared several things that we had

We fell apart because of certain reasons
And then I had to go and act out stupidly
But no matter how it turned out
I'm glad that I met the greatest person without doubt

I'm glad that things turned out for you
And that your life has gone on with time
I just want you to know that I'll never forget you
For you were the best friend I needed at that time

You have my love for a lifetime.

© Copyright 2003 Tara - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
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displaced
1 posted 2003-05-07 01:15 PM


ah yes...what an ending to this, I love it!
j-oh-E
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since 2003-05-01
Posts 59
Texas, USA
2 posted 2003-05-07 02:25 PM


Well, for what it's worth, your poem has won you at least one friend.  I really liked the ending.  
CountryGal
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since 2003-03-09
Posts 24
Missouri, USA
3 posted 2003-05-08 07:13 AM


Thanks for the comments. I'm glad you liked it. It came from the heart.
Nan
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4 posted 2003-05-08 07:39 AM


This piece surely does come from the heart - and the heart of the net offers wonderful friendships to us, doesn't it?  Nicely said, CountryGal..
Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
5 posted 2003-05-08 08:13 AM


A friend of the road came along at a time in your life when that was what you needed. How wonderful for you!
Letting go can be painful, but more friends are on their way!

Healing hugs,
Earth Angel

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
6 posted 2003-05-08 08:26 AM


CountryGal
Well done, enjoyed.

Richy
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since 2003-05-03
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7 posted 2003-05-08 04:18 PM




Always nice to see expressions of friendship!

Great poem CountryGal!


Richy

MikeFessel
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since 2003-04-19
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Brooklyn, NYC, USA
8 posted 2003-05-08 05:02 PM


CountryGal,
Sigh...what a wonderful poem! This is so touching and beautiful. But it sounds to me like like you speak no more   If that is so, perhaps if you send your friend this lovely poem, who knows?   Afterall, why should such a friendship have to end?

     Mike

[This message has been edited by MikeFessel (05-08-2003 05:04 PM).]

garysgirl
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9 posted 2003-05-08 05:18 PM


Country Gal,
this is a really nice poem. You've come to the
right place to make a lot more friends, too, here
amongst the great big Family of Friends at PIP.
Everyone here is so great and loving.
Oh, and maybe you should e-mail this poem to your
other friend that you wrote it about.
Hugs,
Ethel

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