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The Senses |
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quatro Member
since 2003-04-29
Posts 392Galveston, Texas |
The Senses Can you hear me even if I don't make a sound? Can you see me even if I'm nowhere to be found? Can you feel me even if I've left your side? Can you smell me even though my fragrance has died? Will you call me even though I may not hear? Will you look for me even though I may not be near? Will you touch me even though my body's turned cold? Will you inhale my being till the day that you grow old? Naome ~quatro |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Naome: what insight you have and lovely writing ahh this - the eternal question very nice write indeed xxoo |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Ohhh! I like this! Sensually expressed!  Warm hugs, EA |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
With senses such as this there is no such thing as old. |
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quatro Member
since 2003-04-29
Posts 392Galveston, Texas |
littlewing, Thank you so much for your kind words! quatro |
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quatro Member
since 2003-04-29
Posts 392Galveston, Texas |
EA, Warm hugs back attcha!  quatro |
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quatro Member
since 2003-04-29
Posts 392Galveston, Texas |
Decaflame, Thank you for you comment. I wrote this today, and when I started it I had no idea how it would end. It has been almost two years since I have written anything and visiting here has given me inspiration again. Thank you Sincerely, quatro |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Naomi Thank you for sharing your heart and soul through your beautiful words. Take care......Sue I am in motion |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow! just beautiful! |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Naome, the one sense you left out, “touch”... Was what this poem did to me... Such important questions that we all ask ourselves, and wonder about... I really enjoyed it... I hope you start writing again! Your voice has some very meaningful things to say... The Best Of Luck, Richy [This message has been edited by Richy (05-08-2003 04:10 AM).] |
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quatro Member
since 2003-04-29
Posts 392Galveston, Texas |
Suetang, You are quite welcome...Thank YOU. All the best, Naome |
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quatro Member
since 2003-04-29
Posts 392Galveston, Texas |
PS Thanks for reading. Naome |
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quatro Member
since 2003-04-29
Posts 392Galveston, Texas |
Richy, Thank you so much. I'm thrilled to know that I have "touched" you even though we are not near. Sincerely, Naome |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
another go round |
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