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What Will Be , Will Be
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What Will Be , Will Be |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia 
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What Will Be, Will Be Those hollow notes The heart now sings Emptiness echoes On broken wings For love cannot fly Where nothing flows To the lowest ebb Heartache grows Could it be the end Of soulmate dreams My heart of sorrow Anxiously screams I will love you forever What will be, will be I only hope one day You remember me Hope©2003 |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
I hope he does too..... Very nice!!!! Bridgette  "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
thank you Bridgette one can only hope Hope |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
To be remembered with a fond recollection, is something we may never know, because like you said.. What will be, will be~ When it's all said and done, that's pretty much the extent of it. Nice poem Hope~ |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
thank you for your kind , thoughtful reply Hope |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
dang, sounds like something I would write, if I could write anymore |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Thank you Dixie , pouring out my feelings , it was either write them down , or tearfully drown Hope |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Yes, as the song says the future is not ours to see...James |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Your pain flows softly through your words making me feel it strongly...I too hope he will remember....Take care...keep writting it down for in words there is healing...**hugs** |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
So well done  I liked.Tara |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
As time flies by leaving empty days an angel cries and a heart pays. Beautiful writing Hope. alan |
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FlyingCloud Member
since 2003-04-28
Posts 151A little place inside my head |
This is an incredible poem. It shows that we don't have total control over our lives, so sometimes we have to let things flow. +Genuine poetry can communicate before it is understood.+ |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
I will love you forever What will be, will be I only hope one day You remember me I guess I wonder about my lost love, too. I hope to he will remember me. Dang, this love stuff is so hard. You find someone who you believe is exactly what you need...and well, you know the ending. This is just lovely. -Patricia |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
How could he forget you and your beautiful words Hope? I hope all is well with you. Take care......Sue I am in motion |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) I am sure the special memories in your loves heart will never be forgotten and will always hold the vision of you close to heart! (sigh) I send special angel hugs your way, sweet friend, hope all is well, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Hope, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
HopeS - I too hope that you are remembered... BC |
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