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Open Poetry #26

The Failing Light

Shadowed_Innersense
Junior Member

since 2001-12-05

Posts 49
somewhere at the edge

0 posted 2003-05-07 02:40 AM

In the failing light
ailing hearts are seeking
between day and night
what life is speaking
If you so listen
these desires fill the air
all that is missing
day's heavenly glare
In the failing light
hopeful hearts understand
that the coming night
holds what they demand
If you breathe in deep
hold the moment to heart
memories will keep
though one may depart
In the failing light
find comfort knowing true
when such time is right
I will be with you.

      In the grey light of dusk, with eyes hard to
      focus, set your mind free and witness the day's
      toll of souls passing.

        In Memory of all loved ones, past and present.

from the edge ...

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

1 posted 2003-05-07 02:59 AM

Shadow:

God . . . this is beautiful
truly
amazing write
and Welcome - how did I miss you?
xxoo

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2003-05-07 03:16 AM

just beautiful, sad, but well done

Shadowed_Innersense
Junior Member

since 2001-12-05

Posts 49
somewhere at the edge

3 posted 2003-05-07 04:26 AM

Thank you, ladies ...
    I've never really been missed.
    Just lost amongst the SHADOWS.

Sonic
Junior Member

since 2003-05-06

Posts 13
Victoria, Australia

4 posted 2003-05-07 04:57 AM

R.I.P.
A sweet goodbye.

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