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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York 
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There I lie dying on the vine? Wrinkled red rose petal scent of what once was and will never be again lingers . . . Water never tasted so good |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Oh Sue, believe me, the water will taste better for sure, when your heart agains shines with the joy you deserve and it will be like ambrosia honey! (kiss on cheek) This is heartfelt, sweet friend, I send angel hugs your way, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
You've proven that less is more...excellent theme, well written. Melissa~ Intellectually I know that Canada is no better than any other country. Emotionally I KNOW that Canada is the best country in the world! |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Sometimes the after taste is bittersweet, wine and roses make for a pretty song, but it's the vine that clings and wraps around the sun, that ripens the fruit for years to come. Love your work tweets~ |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
littlewing - perhaps a sip of sweet wine for the lady with a smile... BC |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
A pint of Keith's tastes and feels better right about now.. |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
To quench the parch and wash the past. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
littlewing Interessting write, enjoyed. |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Sue, Yes, interesting write that you do so well. Enjoyed as always, Hugs to you, Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Noah - always sucj smiles from you TY Melissa - thank you so much - means a lot to me - I enjoy your writing too Bluesy - nicely said- hmmm memories TY Bill- ahhh would be lovely - so sweet TY Raph: ok I may have something similar here . . . let me go see lol TY Ed - exactly! you got it! TY Sy - interesting indeed - TY Pat - interesting in strange interesting? lol thank you Thanks guys xxoo |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
enjoyed the taste of this one, for sure... regards, sudhir |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
dying on the vine...we all have been there, me...over and over but thank God for water, ey? |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Wow....! This is vivid...beautifuly so. Eric |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Drink up, littlewing! A beauteous rose needs to moisturize from the inside out as well as from the outside in!  Healing hugs and a cupfull of dew drops... EA |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Another for my library! This is awesome littlewing - love it. Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Drat! Forgot to press the libary thingy - AGAIN..hee hee....  |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Sudhir - glad you enjoyed - very sweet TY Dixie: ahahaha yes we have all been there goodness I think we live there sometimes and without water - whoa . . . TY Ericc - thank you - always something sweet to say to me EA: Im drinkin - Im drinkin . . . wait am I suppossed to be drinking water? hehehe TY Chris- thank you - means a lot to me you would put this in your library - your writes are so inspiring Thanks guys xxoo |
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dreambuilder Member
since 2003-03-23
Posts 319caddyshack |
water never tasted so good and poetry was never written so refreshing & tasteful as you Loved this as always looking forward to more special blessings such as this perhaps - Louis Jadot ? |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
dream: *smiling* a Chardonnay perhaps? thank you sincerely xxoo |
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