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some sundown afternoon

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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 05-06-2003 08:54 PM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Dark Stranger

would you work as a ranger
in my forest
would you control the animals of me
when they run wild
there....at the sides of your smile

where tan and laughing eyes dance
would you tell me stories about your fish
under the sea
when it is nude on horizon
and wears only the suntan skins

would you fold your thumb under fingers
and pretend to be shy
in pink or pale
with your toes painted pretty
and your lips wet with words

and would I beg you to say them
loud softly from the inside
of your soul song drums
the ones you play when sleeping
or pretending to sleep

just before some tomorrow morning cries?


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1 posted 05-06-2003 08:58 PM       View Profile for Mistletoe Angel   Email Mistletoe Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Mistletoe Angel's Home Page   View IP for Mistletoe Angel



(sigh) I truly believe your special someone would do such things and fulfill your requirements, as I wish for your estuary to always be inundating with sparrows and flamingoes to color your hearts world! (big hugggsssssss) This is wonderful, sweet friend, it is wonderful to see you here again, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

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2 posted 05-06-2003 09:00 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

Is it you?     Welcome home.

[This message has been edited by Sunshine (05-06-2003 09:01 PM).]

Martie
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3 posted 05-06-2003 09:00 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

Hey DS...So good to see you!...always your words are so visually sensory and provocative..and enjoyed!  Hugs!
Dark Stranger
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4 posted 05-06-2003 09:18 PM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Stranger

Noah.........howdy amigo.......the gypsy of me is on the keys for a moment....thanks for the eyes my friend.


Sunshine......you are the tan sin of memory, I enjoy the burn of your smile......you melt the ice that I sipped from some yesterday til now........thanks babe


Ms Martie.....park by the side of some sigh place and let the boys play in their swings, wave at me with flowers in handfuls......my armor is dull without your smile......thank you for dancing by
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Somewhere in time~


5 posted 05-06-2003 09:34 PM       View Profile for Enchantress   Email Enchantress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Enchantress

DS!!  You have no idea
how much your words have been missed...
Please stay awhile?
Play awhile?
~Hugs & Teasing Smiles~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Janet Marie
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6 posted 05-06-2003 09:36 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

where tan and laughing eyes dance
would you tell me stories about your fish
under the sea
when it is nude on horizon
and wears only the suntan skins
=======================

YER SO KEWL

stick around so us moths may tan in your pretty blue flame

You're the best I've ever felt ...
it's so wrong not to be with you.
It's getting harder to stay away,
it stops my heart just to be with you.

SH

Dark Stranger
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7 posted 05-06-2003 10:11 PM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Stranger

'chantress......stay and play........sure for awhile if you will whisper sweet things
just for a moment of a thousand


Janet, sweet mothy ......you are wind in the leaves.....you make the sounds that night voices try to copy on their wings
wranx
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Moved from a shack to a barn


8 posted 05-06-2003 10:33 PM       View Profile for wranx   Email wranx   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for wranx

Dark! You scooter trash! Good to see ya here....
And you brought a little something as well.

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9 posted 05-06-2003 10:51 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Hey!! It's good to read you again!! This is pure YOU..soft with just an edge of naughty!
BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside


10 posted 05-07-2003 12:14 AM       View Profile for BluesSerenade   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for BluesSerenade

Well lookie here, where you been all my life?
Sounds like you've found yourself a coppertone baby, but you aint seen nothing yet!  My tan is better than her tan....neener, neener, neener.     


So nice to read your dark and sultry stuff again DS~
HopeS
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11 posted 05-07-2003 12:30 AM       View Profile for HopeS   Email HopeS   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit HopeS's Home Page   View IP for HopeS

lips wet with words , sliding my tongue
D.S your words sing like a soul song

Missed you , welcome back
Hope
Severn
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12 posted 05-07-2003 03:02 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Well...you've lived up to your name for awhile it seems...

Nice to read your work again DS

K
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13 posted 05-07-2003 07:26 AM       View Profile for Cpat Hair   Email Cpat Hair   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cpat Hair

DS... good to see you back...

I enjoyed reading your unique style again.

Charisma
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14 posted 05-07-2003 08:18 AM       View Profile for Charisma   Email Charisma   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Charisma's Home Page   View IP for Charisma

Always a pleasure to read you.



Charisma
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mmmmmmmmm....
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