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Figure me out
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Figure me out |
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Black Swan Member
since 2003-02-05
Posts 165on the moon 
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This poem is about someone I am trying really really hard to get to know, he's not making this easy for me...I am sure he is going to spawn a whole new collection of frustrations for me to write about :P lol... Free into me what it takes to win thee your heart muffled by the time we are apart given the chance I would win with even just a glance I had you admit the simplicity of your objectivity you fancied me all along facade won't intimidate this tough one riddle is nothing more then fear your deep yet your mystery lies in your secret vulnerability tease me with frozen touch cold,unchanging exterior the vacant look you hold the metal, the armor, the venier watching you fight your own emotions is getting old you cry out for someone to know you figure me out you say there's so much more to me you insist but the fact if he matter is your human sometimes its ok to bleed |
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j-oh-E Member
since 2003-05-01
Posts 59Texas, USA |
Wow, all the passion in your writing makes my heart sore as I read your words. I hope this guy understands. I sure do |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
This reminds me of someone I was considering getting involved with recently...in my case I found myself thinking too many negative thoughts...thoughts like this woman is going to bring pain and suffering back into my life...and I don't need that... You must like him because you seem to be really interested...James |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Tanya: facade won't intimidate this tough one keep this mindset this is amazing xxoo |
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Black Swan Member
since 2003-02-05
Posts 165on the moon |
lol! yeah i really like this guy, I am hoping that all my efforts weren't all for nothing in the end! hehe ~Talia |
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