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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
Donning scarves Lightly shutting out the dark When you whispered, “Let me teach you Braille.” I was eager to be an apt Student, Though little did I know I would grade you With an A. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
(chuckling) was that an A for adept or for A**..... evokes subtle sensuality... nicely done |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
Ah, Sir... assume what you will and smile. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) An apple a day keeps the doctor away, and this sure proves that learning does have its own rewards and satisfications! (big hugggssssss) This is delightful, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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j-oh-E Member
since 2003-05-01
Posts 59Texas, USA |
I hate to just say "great job" and then leave you. I feel a poet deserves more than that. So, in response to your poem I'm going to say that you faithfully (yeah that's the right word) captured the relationship between a student and instructor who really cares. Your poem, to me, is a tribute to those who survive on faith. That's special. |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Something about this touches me on a couple of different levels. Its too hard to explain, but I think it has something to do with being taught braille..just gives me an inspiration for something else. Okay..enough babbling. I love this. You could hurt me with your bare hands. You could hurt me using the sharp edge of what you say. JEWEL |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ohmygosh!! And here I find you once again gracing our pages! Wonderful wonderful write Deca!! ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I want the name of this instructor  Nice write Deca, and very sensual. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Very sensual indeed. enjoyed very much. Maree  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
deca dent....... and lovely n joyed ms d |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
Joe, a very kind comment, thank you... thanks to everyone for reading in all of your varied ways. |
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