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Davis and Lou's |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
I stuck out my hand, “Travis” I said introducing myself. “Davis” he replied and gripped my hand in one almost twice the size. “We seem to have a common interest.” I began, not knowing where I was going to end. “Lacey? Yeah we do.” Came the cautious but terse reply. “You have a history with her, Davis.” “I’m just trying to begin one.” I offered with a grin. “She and I go a ways back.” “Some good times some bad like all things.” He replied as his posture changed from rigid oak To spring steel. “Look,” he almost growled “What’s your point here?” “You are someone she cares about,” I started “and I figured anyone she cares about had to be special.” “I wanted to find out for myself.” “You’re a fool.” He laughed. “You aren’t the first one to tell me that.” I chuckled. “and probably won’t be the last.” “Look, Davis,” I drew a breath “I told Lacey I was leaving” “She could use a friend.” I turned and walked back out the door. Sunshine blinded me after the inside of Lou’s With it’s dark shadowed cool, and I stumbled Just managing to catch myself by grabbing The fender of someone’s car. It takes a while for eyes to adjust When you’ve been sitting in the gloom. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Ron, This is wonderful writing, as I have said so many times to your writes... ---------- “She could use a friend.” .... .... and I stumbled Just managing to catch myself by grabbing The fender of someone’s car. It takes a while for eyes to adjust When you’ve been sitting in the gloom. ----------- how could it not be wonderful? thanks for the read, regards, sudhir |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
I have to saying exactly what Sudhir said...right to the phrases/thoughts he quotes... Ah, this is indeed great!!! Sighing, for I love these writes.... Hugs Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I turned and walked back out the door. Sunshine blinded me after the inside of Lou’s With it’s dark shadowed cool, and I stumbled Just managing to catch myself by grabbing The fender of someone’s car. ~*~ Careful there, young man... we can't have you stumbling... not just yet...  |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I turned and walked back out the door. Sunshine blinded me after the inside of Lou’s With it’s dark shadowed cool, and I stumbled Just managing to catch myself by grabbing The fender of someone’s car. It takes a while for eyes to adjust When you’ve been sitting in the gloom. ========================= ya know what I always say...... it aint easy being a moth  |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
quote: I grinned too |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I see that you included our Sunshine and Gloom in this illustrious write--as well as yourself!  Warm hugs, EA |
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