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Doin' the Shag

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serenity blaze
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0 posted 05-06-2003 09:49 AM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for serenity blaze


I drifted my shoes off real slow
just so I can curl the cues
off the pinks and purple toes--
been so long since I did that.

Oh I liked the way it felt
somethin' there for me to grab
damn it's been a real long time
since I danced barefoot on shag.

I played the denim of my shirt
off my shoulders, riding low--
hearing moans of the church goin'
women make me lose my mind...

So I snapped the button down
and hitched a ride upon a zip
taunting train to go down hip--
tell me that I aint soul-full?

baby, baby, watch me now,
play my fingers through my hair
and take a real long taste of--this?
eyelashes bat down to--there...

baby-baby, baby-please?
watch me go down on my knees.
Feel the blend of neverend
of pinks and purple--shag again...
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Jason Lyle
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With my darkling


1 posted 05-06-2003 09:55 AM       View Profile for Jason Lyle   Email Jason Lyle   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jason Lyle

Can I have the next dance! (wipes sweat from brow) wishing I was a shag carpet right now.

Jason
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2 posted 05-06-2003 10:11 AM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine


The shag on shag...
I think I just lost about 35 years...

yep...

I do believe so....
garysgirl
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3 posted 05-06-2003 10:19 AM       View Profile for garysgirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit garysgirl's Home Page   View IP for garysgirl

I played the denim of my shirt
off my shoulders, riding low--
hearing moans of the church goin'
women make me lose my mind...

Yep, K...
never could understand why  they  didn't like my dancing....
I always did...and do!!!


Dance on, Lady!!!!!

Hugs,
Ethel
(Psssttt!!  You knew I'd put something on here dancing, didn't you? I've got a baby with a smiley face dancing, but I resisted putting that one.  LOL)

[This message has been edited by garysgirl (05-06-2003 10:20 AM).]

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines


4 posted 05-06-2003 10:35 AM       View Profile for nakdthoughts   Email nakdthoughts   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for nakdthoughts

do they still have shag? How old are you anyway...(don't answer) I thought that was before your time.

Hugss
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5 posted 05-06-2003 12:58 PM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

I'm wondering if the vacuum cleaner is ready. . .

you have the neatest vision. . .

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Aenimal
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take pics next time we need the visuals
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7 posted 09-06-2005 01:59 PM       View Profile for Mysteria   Email Mysteria   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mysteria

Just felt like a dance with ya today     A girl going crazy kinda dance yanno?
 
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