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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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down drifting lowly oh ye dance and watch my chin lifting up the waters lourdes I transcend--as I transcend... mischief eyes of blue you see waterment of destiny glistening Yea, glistening talking back to me? Oh mend... muddied fingers playing pouts tapping out the differences and spraying ply the welterspout of a certain waterwell in the depth of country green as if I had seen all of me? as if I had as if I had-- as if I had seen all of me... down spoon clacking up fork breathe watch my fingers wantoning in their desperate whispering listen to the all of me-- plying spray of welterspoon oh listen, love-- the laughter'd loon. Tell me I am beckoning just one finger's fork of breathe... as if I had seen all of me? waterment of destiny glistening yeah glistening dancing on the waves... [This message has been edited by serenity blaze (05-06-2003 07:50 AM).] |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
I always learn something when I read you..lol...if nothing more than how far I have to go... |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
as if I had seen all of me? waterment of destiny glistening yeah glistening dancing on the waves... Goodmorning Karen  May we forever shine, while dancing on the waves!!  Hugs, Ethel |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
down drifting lowly oh ye dance and watch my chin lifting up the waters lourdes I transcend--as I transcend... mischief eyes of blue you see waterment of destiny glistening Yea, glistening talking back to me? Oh mend... muddied fingers playing pouts tapping out the differences and spraying ply the welterspout of a certain waterwell in the depth of country green as if I had seen all of me? as if I had as if I had-- as if I had seen all of me... ============================== as if I had seen all of me? waterment of destiny glistening yeah glistening dancing on the waves... ============================= You and me both Ron.... KA??? damn baby..... (you rock)  You're the best I've ever felt ... |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
dancing on the waves... yep...  regards, sudhir |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"oh listen, love-- the laughter'd loon. Tell me I am beckoning just one finger's fork of breathe... as if I had seen all of me? waterment of destiny glistening yeah glistening dancing on the waves..." Wonderful.... One day I'm gonna learn to write like you Karen! ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
 bravo for this wonderful piece Charisma |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
as if I had seen all of me? as if I had as if I had-- as if I had seen all of me... ~*~ you didn't know when you wrote this that you spoke for more than yourself... but we know. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Such heart play here...taps on the shoulder, summoning the index to come closer... Very inspiring write. TD |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Wanted to pop in for a quick note of gratitude--so thanks much for reading! I'll be back soon to catch up with all you-- okay, I'll try to catch up with some of you--lotsa poets deze daze. Love to all. Thanks again! |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Ok K? this line alone says it all: I transcend--as I transcend... *shaking head* amazing xxoo |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
I don't know why but your words always make me want to reach my hands up to the sky and breath in life...I love that feeling... |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
Karen, this is an amazing write. Everytime I read something of yours I realize that I have a very long way to go in my writing to get any where near your class act. alan |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Oh, little gypsy lady ... do your dance~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
serenity blaze - dream waves dancing with you... BC |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
serenity---You know what...I think I'm going to follow you around...to learn more, and to set something free in me...that I see in you. Can you tell I liked this??  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I'm following too |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Smiling with gratitude. This is what happens when you read Irish poets, listen to Celtic music and?  take up infamous Irish habits.But it IS one that I enjoyed writing, I will say that!  Hugs all and thank you. |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
I want to read more of this from you this is inspiring  |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
Fabulous QjQ |
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