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ptwils165
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0 posted 2003-05-06 07:34 AM


Enveloped in warmth, hidden away;
sharing pure glimpses of heaven with friends.
Time vacates this impossible day,
For beauty to drown us with all that it sends.
Nature to guide us, singing in smiles;
Memories floating on soft stars of light;
Laughter to tell us these dreams run for miles,
Ebbing away on the tide of this night.

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Nan
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1 posted 2003-05-07 07:33 AM


August does have an ambience all its own... 'Tis a special month to be thoroughly enjoyed - after June & July, yes?

This is a lovely piece indeed...

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2 posted 2003-05-07 12:12 PM



Pete?

Your poetry touches deeply.

An interesting write and one can read many things into it's layering.

Thank you for posting it.

Hugs, Pat

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3 posted 2003-05-07 01:34 PM


All of my best memories are in August for some reason.  I must admit there is something special about this month.  To me, it seems the whole world just slows down, takes a breath of warm air, and gets ready for the coming months.  It's like the "coffee-break" month or something.  Great writing.
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4 posted 2003-05-07 01:51 PM


Enjoyed these thoughts, beautifully penned.
TD

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5 posted 2003-05-07 02:18 PM


ah this is what I like.......beautifully description

Charisma

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