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jennirey
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since 2002-01-24
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North Richland HillsTx

0 posted 2003-05-06 12:31 PM


Over the fog and through the gate,

She flies.

Passing ordinarily over the glass lake.

Tipping her wings to the crisp air.

Good Morning, She cries.

Steady and smooth, Strong and vibrant.

Paying homage to the free

She flies.

Whispering stillness lies in her wake.


Jennirey 2003

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icebox
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since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383
in the shadows
1 posted 2003-05-06 12:34 PM


Very nice image.  Thank you for sharing it.
BluesSerenade
Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
2 posted 2003-05-07 11:32 AM


Beautiful scenery you've painted jennirey.

I especially liked the glass lake
and the stillness in her wake.

Such a pretty picture, this.

littlewing
Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
3 posted 2003-05-07 11:34 AM


jennirey:

ohh how I picture this flight

lovely - nice writing
you brought me there you did
xxoo

Justbleu
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since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)
4 posted 2003-05-08 07:06 AM


Very nice....
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown


Soleil Noir
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since 2001-12-19
Posts 688
USA
5 posted 2003-05-08 02:25 PM



Flight...
fanciful, fulfilling, free.

Enjoyed, thank you.

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