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Sinzofthesic
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since 2003-02-21
Posts 5


0 posted 2003-05-05 10:05 PM


we slip into the shades, Alone atlas
the sun fades, you eyes apon mine
what's on your mind?
forget who we left behind
exhale, so i can breath you in, come closer
I wanna feel my fingers crawl over your skin
feel me, deep with in
My heart is pounding with ecstasy
IM loosing my breath, with you next to me
Ask me What am i thinking
And I'll answer you
Cuz IM sinking deeper into you
Tell me how much you want me
I tell you the same
Tell me all things on your mind
I cuz I cant stop this flame
We open our eyes and a tear falls
something we cant stand
Your love is in demand
Kiss you good by as i leave your hand


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Justbleu
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since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)
1 posted 2003-05-08 07:01 AM


Enjoyed!!!!
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown


CountryGal
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since 2003-03-09
Posts 24
Missouri, USA
2 posted 2003-05-08 07:19 AM


So sad. Very nicely written though.
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