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Just Came True
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Just Came True |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050
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Just Came True Have you seen her here before last seen holding my heart? I gave it to her in this dream now with it she won’t part Her skin is silky to the feel soft tones that cast a hue Of vibrant tints that blend into a satin silky smooth Two cat like lashes fluttering like velvet butterflies Trying to, conceal her two divine Garbo-esque eyes Two eyes that see things about me that I find hard to see The person that I always hoped that one day I might be She has a lure of gracefulness adorned by wit and charm That’s nestled with a devilish streak that one could not disarm Her heart is made of solid gold devotion matched by none A spirit never ceasing to always make time for fun A mind that’s always open to another’s point of view Compassion for her friend or foe sometimes hard to construe She’s warm and comfy hard as nails, a silly forceful calm A complicated tenderness as soothing as a balm We love to do so many things We can’t stand being apart If something we’re to happen to It would tear me apart She makes me feel so loved that sometimes I can feel quite ill The chance of ever losing her would make my world stand still She’s is the reason why I thrive the air that my heart breathes She keeps my spirit strong reviving hope in my belief That one day I will meet the one that fills my life with bliss She’s somewhere out there waiting just like me for that one kiss I waken covered in a sweat and notice it is she Laying right there still asleep with her arms holding me I feel her lips and hear her say “Is something bothering you?” “No my dear, how could it be, when my dream just came true?” [This message has been edited by Richy (05-05-2003 06:16 PM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh my..ohhhh myyy Richy! This is wonderful..exquisitely beautiful! And, the last stanza just blew me away! Love it...a keeper for sure! ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Richy, I see you have your love...I am still wishing. I hope you have read this love letter to her. It is beautiful, as is all of your work. We got the ryhme thing happening, don't we? LOL Make sure you read this to your love!!!! -Patricia |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
She’s warm and comfy hard as nails, a silly forceful calm A complicated tenderness as soothing as a balm So precious this is~ |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
May I take this opportunity to welcome you to PIP. Enjoyed the river of beauty painted in your dreams. TD |
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Zaynab Member
since 2003-05-04
Posts 59Kuwait |
Richy, this is just so sweet! She's a lucky lucky girl. Take care dear friend Zaynab xxxxxxxx Kill me tonight and I will love again |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Wishes can--and do!--come true! I am so very thrilled for you! What a ooo la la romantic write!  Love & Eternal Light, EA |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Thank You Nancy you are just so gracious... Your such a delight! Patricia, thanks as always for your tremendous kindness and encouraging words... ...Oh, and don’t believe everything you read... Sometimes what someone writes about the most... is what is lacking the most, in their life? Thanks for taking the time to read and respond BluesSerenade... Your comments are always so welcomed... Hey TD, it’s a pleasure meeting you! And thanks for the warm welcome, and nice comments... Zaynab, it’s always so nice to hear from you! Thanks so much for replying... Your the best! Why thank you Eternal Light! I Love your name... Richy [This message has been edited by Richy (05-06-2003 06:53 PM).] |
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