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Patiently
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Patiently I will wait... ...patiently for you... to be mine... ...all mine.. ....for all time.. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Virtues... be yours... enjoyed this, and its intensity! |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
A thousand suns...a thousand moons shall rise and fall...and yet, though they fall, you will wait...patiently... Enjoyed this...Thanx Scorpio.. |
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davidmerriman Member
since 2003-04-30
Posts 123Dallas, TX |
you did well for how few words you used. i would not write something that short though hehe. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Deepest love is patient. Excellent. TD |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thats a long time...at times I say that I will wait forever but in truth my patience always runs out somewhere inbetween now and forever...and usually much closer to now than forever...James |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
scorpio Patiently intense, enjoyed |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
This verse of so few words.. is so beautiful in its intensity. You write with great profoundess.. when you write with your heart upon your sleeve. You wear it well, dear Scorpio.  ~ I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before ~ |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Thank you, Karilea...I have very intense feelings about the lady I love...sometimes I can find the words to express them..today was one of those times.. A thousand suns and moons would not dampen my ardour or my patience...thank you, Barry.. David, I'm man of deeds...words are much harder for me...thank you for your kind comments.. ThisDiamond, thank you for reading and commenting...I have to agree with you.. Sy, I'm so pleased you enjoyed this poem...I appreciate your support very much.. Thank you, Nancy...if I could write with an eighth of your talent I'd be happy...my heart is always open to your support.. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Oh Scorpio, this is touching, sweet friend, I have been more than patient waiting to see loves smile for the first time and receive a first kiss! (big hugggsssss) This is touching, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Scorpio, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
patience... hmm.. what does that word mean?  very nice ... |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
few words which shows your love very powerful! enjoyed, Charisma |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Thank you Noah...I always look forward to your comments...I hope your patience has been rewarded.. Ron, there's the Webster definition and then the one the lies within the heart...thank you.. Charisma...thank you for your kinds words.. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I am not at all surprised by your intensity of feelings, Scorpio - in reading your profile, it fits, and like a glove. Still enjoying this... |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
And I thought my profile was very mundane... believe in what your heart feels... |
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