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Open Poetry #26

Slow Burn

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-05-05 02:16 PM

Slow Burn

did you know
that when you
remove your hand
from my skin
your warmth remains
you think
you are a shadow
but you
are a flame
kindling me
in a slow burn

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

1 posted 2003-05-05 02:21 PM

what a message!!! great write,

It matters not how you answer, It matters only that i hear you.

Martini
Member

since 2000-07-11

Posts 308
Toronto, Ontario, Canada

2 posted 2003-05-05 02:21 PM

I know that feeling,
excellent depiction of exactly how the "slow burn" feels

Thomas119gold
Senior Member

since 2002-06-03

Posts 708
Biloxi, MS (city by the sea)

3 posted 2003-05-05 02:32 PM

A burn that only leaves scars on the soul
but scars of love and passion are not always bad.

Rogue

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2003-05-05 02:49 PM

damn...how beautiful...

*sitting in silent awe*

Brad Majors

Member Elite

since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

5 posted 2003-05-05 02:58 PM

well done!

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