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Open Poetry #26

She Walks

CastleGuard
Senior Member

since 2003-04-30

Posts 760
Alberta, Canada

0 posted 2003-05-05 01:36 PM

She Walks

She walks along the moving shore
Of future and of past.
What secrets does the ocean store
Beneath its depth so vast?

Where is the ship that brings His heart
Toward her longing sight?
Will playful winds reveal their part
-- And sway the course of right?

The Fate is thrifty and its gift
It guards with watchful hand.
Many a ship but aimless drift
From rock to shifty sand.

She walks along the moving shore
And yearns her love to cast.
Till day the ocean hides no more
-- His heart upon the mast.

CG

j-oh-E
Member

since 2003-05-01

Posts 59
Texas, USA

1 posted 2003-05-05 02:27 PM

I'll be the first to post a reply. I love images of the sea in poetry. If you think about it, most of the greatest poets wrote in some way or another about its vastness(I hope that's a word). I think your poem is great.

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

2 posted 2003-05-05 08:20 PM

Hi, this is a beautiful poem, flowing with the scent and sound of the sea.
Sandra

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